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I'm sorry, this may be cruel, but the end ,made me laugh. I really enjoy this series, and I think that you are helping a lot of people out there ...

Thank you thank you thank you! Finally, a girl has stood up and said that women can and will be warriors too! I'm tired of all guys thinking that they ...

Holy cow. Good flow, imaginary and heart. I could feel the meadow beneathe the sky and i could see the sea-gulls flying. Good use of adjectives and nouns. Praise: *the ...

Quentin Unlovable, teenage girl. Bully. Most of the time depressed. She does drugs. Somewhat fat, blue eyes. Long, red hair. Not athletic. Hates the world.

because it is an undiscovered fruit. Why are there two sperate genders-boys and girls?

ok, thanks. I will sooo change that.

ooooooh, 9/10. pretty blue colors! I like colors. :shock:

to waist your time while pointlessly acting stupid. Why is the world round?

ohh. i thought i did, but oh well.

because of cheese. Why do cows moo?

What do you mean that I should bring something even newer to it?

Ice Queen Blue. Pale. Alone. She sits in her ice castle, creating the crystals, that imprison her soul. Some may call her mean, but it's children who fear her. Her ...

Whoa, deep. I really liked it, but I couldn't find the flow. It feels kinda meshed together, no? Good points about it: *nice expressions *your words are descriptive *the second ...

Whoa! Don't we all wish that that would happen? LOVE IT!! Specially the ending! Caught me off gaurd! *gives gold star* I would give you multiple gold stars, but it ...

I liked it. Very excellent way of putting Lily into severus's nightmare/love dreams. I've never seen someone write about harry potter like this, and i think i like it. *good ...